Ugh, i have not nailed it

The comments are coming in and it appears that many colleagues are not picking up on what I was trying to do. Is this what I meant? Probably not.

Think I am definitely onto something and feel pretty damn obsessed about it, it's just going to require some more work.

There need to be two worlds. The worlds need to intermix better and earlier, so we don't have to meet the second world at the very beginning of act ii - I think it does slow down the play - instead we need the second world to be waiting on the first world to make the first move, back in Act I... and for the characters in the new world to ready/steady themselves for what is to occur back then.

Around the end of June it'll be picked up again and worked on.

Be good.